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Hi everyone!
- I want to learn english because my frend live in the US.
- Next year I hope to visit her and I must to tell with her family and friends:) Thanks to all support!

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- Please correct my english message )
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- Please correct my english message ) You rather say... Good day everyone!
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- Hi everyone!
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- I want to learn english because my frend live in the US.
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- I want to learn eEnglish because my friend lives in the US.
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- Next year I hope to visit her and I must to tell with her family and friends:) Thanks to all support!
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- Next year I hope to visit her, and I must ~~to tell~~speak with her family and friends. :) Thanks tofor all support!
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