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  • The Problems and Solutions of Rural Areas

  • In the modern world, improving of level of living has tremendous impact on people's lives.
  • However, this makes no difference for the countryside.
  • This essay is going to discuss the causes for these issues in rural areas, negative effects of it and possible solution.
  • There is no doubt that money plays an essential role in the rise for the quality of life in cities.
  • Therefore, the lack of money in the rural areas can cause a wide range of problems such as a poor health care or weak infrastructure.
  • When the government spends less money on improving health system in a region, this have a negative effect on local hospitals which can lead to a risk for patients’ lives in case of the bad conditions of service.
  • In addition, the weak infrastructure is a big problem in the case of poor maintaining of roads, buildings or pipe systems.
  • These could cause accidents that have a negative effect on people's lives.
  • For instance, a bad road can be affected driving, so citizen could be hurt or in the worst case scenario be the reason for their death.
  • Nevertheless, these problems could be easily solved with an adequate financial support for rural area and with strictly control of the government.
  • To conclusion, there are a lot of issues in the countryside when government set the high standards of living without the financial support, but most of them could be solved with additional funding and the monitoring of quality of the service.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
    • This essay is going to discuss the causes for these issues in rural areas, negative effects of it and possible solution.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • Therefore, the lack of money in the rural areas can cause a wide range of problems such as a poor health care or weak infrastructure.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • When the government spends less money on improving health system in a region, this have a negative effect on local hospitals which can lead to a risk for patients’ lives in case of the bad conditions of service.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
    • In addition, the weak infrastructure is a big problem in the case of poor maintaining of roads, buildings or pipe systems.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • For instance, a bad road can be affected driving, so citizen could be hurt or in the worst case scenario be the reason for their death.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
    • Nevertheless, these problems could be easily solved with an adequate financial support for rural area and with strictly control of the government.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10
  • Zdanie 11
    • To conclusion, there are a lot of issues in the countryside when government set the high standards of living without the financial support, but most of them could be solved with additional funding and the monitoring of quality of the service.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11