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從gleidy來的文本 - English

  • speech of c.v.

    • I worked as commercial consultant in the financial sector.
    • My responsabilities ( or activities ?) were: call portfolio clients and potential clients.
    • looking for companies whit establish partnership (or collaboration ?)

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