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Сообщение от Marie1602 - English

  • In the shadow of the mountain.

  • Edward Newton had left his family to go live in Zermatt where he could practise his passion: climbing.
  • Unfortunately, he had an accident while he was climbing at the top of the Matterhorn Mountain and he didn't survive.
    • Only seventy-four years later, his body was reappeared under the snow from the bottom of this mountain, it was obviously a shock for his family.
    • Even if Clara Newton, his granddaughter who was a journalist, didn't know him very much, she had to traval in Zermatt to bring home the Edward's body close to her family.
  • During her journey, she tried to find out more about her grandfather's accident.
  • Firstly, she discovered that Edward wasn't alone while he was climbing.
    • Indeed, he had a partner called Gordon Younger, who was also died of the fall.
  • Afterwards, she thought that there was maybe a local guide with the two men so she tried to find out that.
    • One day, she met a gorgeous man, Bruno, with who she has had a relationship.
  • Gradually, he had confessed her that his grandfather, Ulrich Grunwalder, was Edward,s instructor so she asked him immediately to organize a meeting with Ulrich in order to know a bit more about how her grandfather died.
  • A few days later, she met him and he began to explain her everything.
    • In fact, Edward's partner was falled in love of the Edward's wife, Agatha.
    • But Edward loved Marrianne, the Ulrich's sister, it was why he had left all his family, because he loved an another woman!
  • However, Agathe loved Edward again, and not Gordon.
  • It has created a lot of jealousy and argument.
  • So, Ulrich explained to Clare that he thought that Gordon pushed Edward while he was climbing on the Matterhorn and unluckily he fell also...
  • Nevertheless, nobody would never know what was really happened...

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