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THE JUNGLE BOOK
THE HILLS SEEMED AN OVEN.
FATHER WOLF, WHO HAD PASSED THE DAY SLEEPING, ROUSED .
HE SCRATCHED, YAWNED AND ONE AFTER THE OTHER WAS STRETCHING HIS LEGS.
HE WANTED TO GET RID OF ALL THE STIFFNESS THAT HE HAD ACCUMULATED IN THEM.
MOTHER WOLF WAS LYING DOWN.
HER GRAY HEAD RESTED , AS A SIGN OF LOVE AND PROTECTION, ON THE WOLF CUB, FOUR ANIMALS DEFENSELESS AND NOISY.
THE MOON WAS SHINING IN ALL OF HIS NIGHT SPLENDOR, OUTSIDE OF THE CAVE.

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문장 1
- THE HILLS SEEMED AN OVEN.
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문장 2
- FATHER WOLF, WHO HAD PASSED THE DAY SLEEPING, ROUSED .
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- HE SCRATCHED, YAWNED AND ONE AFTER THE OTHER WAS STRETCHING HIS LEGS.
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- HE WANTED TO GET RID OF ALL THE STIFFNESS THAT HE HAD ACCUMULATED IN THEM.
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- MOTHER WOLF WAS LYING DOWN.
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문장 6
- HER GRAY HEAD RESTED , AS A SIGN OF LOVE AND PROTECTION, ON THE WOLF CUB, FOUR ANIMALS DEFENSELESS AND NOISY.
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- THE MOON WAS SHINING IN ALL OF HIS NIGHT SPLENDOR, OUTSIDE OF THE CAVE.
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