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  • The importance of fashion in teenagers' lives.

    • A lot of teenagers nowadays are very concerned about their appearance.
    • They want to stand out from the crowd, express their personality and make a good impression.
    • Sometimes fashion allows teenagers to reach an understanding between peers.
    • Teenagers are trying to find their own individual style but sometimes it seems that almost all of them dressed alike.
    • They wear tight pants of bright color, frayed jeans, sneakers or shoes of famous brands, shirts and T-shirts with unusual print.
    • Also a lot of youth movement can determine teenager's fashion.
    • It is believed that the more expensive and more popular clothing brand the better it looks.
    • Many fashion brands use different tools for sales promotion.
    • Modern teens become a victim of advertising in magazines and TV or in the streets.
    • Many young girls want to look like top models, they want to have large wardrobe, fashion for them it is the way to express themselves.
    • As for me I do not follow fashion trends and try to choose clothing that suits me more.
    • I have never had any special preferences in clothes.
    • As many teens of my age group I like to wear jeans and bright hoodies.
    • I used to hate wearing dresses and skirts before but now when I got older I started to love them.
    • I usually wear neutral colors like: white, black, gray and light blue, but I also like bright colors.
    • My style of clothing can tell you that I am very conservative person but at the same time I want to emphasize my individuality.
    • In my opinion it is impossible to follow fashion all the time and spending your time and money at the shopping centers.
    • Fashion is important but still I try to put my energy into doing something more interesting.

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    • A lot of teenagers nowadays are very concerned about their appearance.
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    • A lot of teenagers nowadayNowadays, many teenagers are very concerned about their appearance.
    • Anowadays a lot of teenagers nowadays are very concerned about their appearance.
    • ANowadays lots of teenangers nowadays are very concerned about their appearance.
    • A lot of teenagers nowadays are veryToday's teens are very concerned about their appearance.¶

      Note to ALL English Language Learners:¶

      Try not using the word "nowadays", it is somewhat insipid and one can convey precisely the same meaning with simply using the word "today" or other construction indicating a "contemporary"phenomenon. ¶

      Note to everyone: Teens have been concerned about their appearance today AND yesterday -- like, since the dawn of "teen fashion", etc. I was a teen during The Sixties and believe me, the teens of that era were as
      concerned about their "appearance" as anything we've witnessed over the last 20-30 years.
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    • Teenagers are trying to find their own individual style but sometimes it seems that almost all of them dressed alike.
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    • Teenagers are trying to find their own individual style, but sometimes it seems that almost all of them dressed alike.
    • TWhile teenagers arseem ot be trying to find their own individual style but sometimestyle, it seems iat seemtimes that almost all of them dressed alike.
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    • They wear tight pants of bright color, frayed jeans, sneakers or shoes of famous brands, shirts and T-shirts with unusual print.
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    • They wear tight pants ofin bright colors, frayed jeans, sneakers or shoes of famous brands, shirts and T-shirts with unusual prints.
    • They wear very tight pants, often brightly color, frayed jeans, sneakers or shoes of famous brands, shirtsed (but also black), frayed jeans, "famous label" sneakers or other footwear, and T-shirts adorned with unusual print.

      (note: re: the word "print", do you intend it to mean "slogan" or "design/pattern"?)
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    • Many young girls want to look like top models, they want to have large wardrobe, fashion for them it is the way to express themselves.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Many young girls want to look like top models, they want to have large wardrobe, fashion for them it. For them, fashion is thea way to express themselves.
    • MWany young girls want to look like top models, they want to have large wardrobe, fashion for them it is the way to ting to look like top fashion models, many young women desire a large wardrobe, through which they can "express" themselves.
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    • My style of clothing can tell you that I am very conservative person but at the same time I want to emphasize my individuality.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • My style of clothing can tell you that I am very conservative person but that the same time I want to emphasize my individuality at the same time.
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    • In my opinion it is impossible to follow fashion all the time and spending your time and money at the shopping centers.
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    • In my opinion, it is impossible to follow fashion all the time and. Doing so would require spending all your time and money at the shopping centers.
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