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  • Hi Friends!
    • The Tv show Im going to write about is called Pokemon.
    • I started watching is a child from about a 6 years old.
    • The history focuses in a child called Ash, he want to be the best Pokemon trainer and to achive his dream always is accompanied by his best friend called: Pikachu.
    • Pokemon start transmission around in the year 1999, this show was a success because until today Pokemon continue to release chapters.
    • I love this show because also the tv show, exist a videogame and a TCG.
    • I always remember things about my childhood, comes to my mind Pokemon, and i will always be grateful for this show, for giving me good memories; due to the reasons explained above: Pokemon means a lot to my childhood.
    • Returning to the previous topic, Ash to achive to the best Pokemon trainer must travels to the world and search challenges with his Pokemon friends and live in harmony with them.

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    • The history focuses in a child called Ash, he want to be the best Pokemon trainer and to achive his dream always is accompanied by his best friend called: Pikachu.
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    • The history focuses in a child called Ash, he want to be the best Pokemon trainer and. He wants to achive his dream and he is always is accompanied by his best friend called: Pikachu.
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    • Pokemon start transmission around in the year 1999, this show was a success because until today Pokemon continue to release chapters.
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    • Pokemon started transmission arbound in the yeart 1999, t. This show was a success because until today Pokemon continue to release new chapters.
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    • I always remember things about my childhood, comes to my mind Pokemon, and i will always be grateful for this show, for giving me good memories; due to the reasons explained above: Pokemon means a lot to my childhood.
      투표하세요!
    • I aAlways when I remember things about my childhood, Pokemon comes to my mind Pokemon, and iI will always be grateful for this show, f. For giving me good memories; due to the reasons I explained above: Pokemon means a lot to my childhood.
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    • Returning to the previous topic, Ash to achive to the best Pokemon trainer must travels to the world and search challenges with his Pokemon friends and live in harmony with them.
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    • Returning to the previous topic,. Ash to achive todream is to be the best Pokemon trainer. Therefore he must travels to around the world and search challenges with his Pokemon friends and live in harmony with them.
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