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  • April 30th.

  • Today is Wednesday, April 30th.
    • Today I went to the university, although I woke up so tired, yesterday and the day before yesterday I went to the Taekwondo class.
    • I like that, I feel so good since I practice that sport, I like practice volleyball or soccer the next semeste.
    • My friends (I have few friends :C) does not like practices sports, but I like because I feel good with my body, and I meet more girls and guys.
    • In the formals clases, I must do a database and improvise some programs, I like because I like the soccer and I do about it, and I practice mathematics, exactly 6 hours by day.
    • I want improvise my english and french again, and the next semester, pay for the exams.

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    • Today I went to the university, although I woke up so tired, yesterday and the day before yesterday I went to the Taekwondo class.
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    • Today I went to the university, a. Although I woke up sovery tired, yesterday and the day before yesterday, I went to the Taekwondo class.
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    • I like that, I feel so good since I practice that sport, I like practice volleyball or soccer the next semeste.
      투표하세요!
    • I like that, I feel so good since I began to practice thatis sport,. I would like to practice volleyball or soccer the next semester.
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    • My friends (I have few friends :C) does not like practices sports, but I like because I feel good with my body, and I meet more girls and guys.
      투표하세요!
    • My friends (I have few friends :Calthough their are a few) does not like practices sports, but I like it because I feel good within my body, and. Also, I meet more girls and guys.
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      투표하세요!
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    • In the formals clases, I must do a database and improvise some programs, I like because I like the soccer and I do about it, and I practice mathematics, exactly 6 hours by day.
      투표하세요!
    • In the formals classes, I must do a database programming and improvise some programother soft-wares, I like it because I like the soccer and I do about it, andthe program about it. Moreover I practice mathematics, exactly 6 hours byper day.
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      투표하세요!
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    • I want improvise my english and french again, and the next semester, pay for the exams.
      투표하세요!
    • I want to improvise my eEnglish and fFrench again, and the next semester, pay for the exams. Also I would like to pay for the exams from next semester.
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      투표하세요!
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