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  • Unemployment

  • Jobs are difficult to come by these days.
    • This is something we all here all the time nowadays.
    • We hear as well that the gap between the haves and have nots increases over the years.
    • The thing is, today is very easy to lose your job and being unemployed for a long time.
    • I know people who had been working in a big company for many years and they thought that because their company was strong and big , their job was as guaranteed as a civil servant job.
    • So what do you do if you lose your job when you are fifty?
    • You may hope at the beginning to find a new job in the next few months so they live on the unemployment benefit for that time.
    • Then after searching for a job that has something to do with your last one unsuccessfully, you start look for anything, because you are starting to get nervous, and the anxiety becomes more and more dangerous as your unemployment benefit is close to end.
    • Then you only have one choice, leave your home to try your luck somewhere else, but that means leaving your family behind and spend most of your salary, if you’re lucky enough to find a job soon, on your rent.
    • So this is the reality many people have to live with, most of them with no hope of ever finding a job at all.

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    • I know people who had been working in a big company for many years and they thought that because their company was strong and big , their job was as guaranteed as a civil servant job.
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    • I know people who had been working in a big company for many years and t. They thought that because their company was strong and big , their jobs wasere just as guaranteed as a civil servant's job.
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    • You may hope at the beginning to find a new job in the next few months so they live on the unemployment benefit for that time.
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    • You may hope at the beginning to find a new job in the next few months so theyInitially, you may hope to find a new job within a few months, and it might be feasible to live on theff of unemployment benefit for that times.
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    • Then after searching for a job that has something to do with your last one unsuccessfully, you start look for anything, because you are starting to get nervous, and the anxiety becomes more and more dangerous as your unemployment benefit is close to end.
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    • Then after searching for a job that has someunsuccessfully for a job withing to do with your last one unsuccessfullyhe same field, you start looking for anything, becaus. Maybe you are startbeginning to get nervous, and the anxiety becomes more and more dangerouscute as your unemployment benefit is closome to an end.
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    • Then you only have one choice, leave your home to try your luck somewhere else, but that means leaving your family behind and spend most of your salary, if you’re lucky enough to find a job soon, on your rent.
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    • ThenFinally, you onlmay have only one choice, leave your home to; trying your luck somewhere else, but that which means leaving your home and family behind and spend most of your salary, if you’re lucky enough to find a job soon, on your. If you are lucky to find a job soon, it probably means spending most of your new salary on rent.
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