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  • As a Chinese student who obtained a Master degree in France, I desire to inject my knowledge and background to your group.
  • I hope that after this graduate program, I could join your energy department and continue to improve my work skills and experience.
    • Several years later, I wish to be one of the leaders in China zone, increase the energy market share and improve also the economic development in China, realize a win-win situation.

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    • As a Chinese student who obtained a Master degree in France, I desire to inject my knowledge and background to your group.
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    • I hope that after this graduate program, I could join your energy department and continue to improve my work skills and experience.
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    • Several years later, I wish to be one of the leaders in China zone, increase the energy market share and improve also the economic development in China, realize a win-win situation.
      투표하세요!
    • Several years later, I wish to be one of the leaders in the China zone, increase the energy market share and also improve also the economic development in China, to realize a win-win situation.
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