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    • Please correct these texts I wrote 2, thanks

    • About 10 years ago, I passed “Gaokao” (Chinese College Entrance Examination) and got good notes.
    • I didn`t have any opinion about my future and my career at that time, so I obeyed my parents orders to apply for clinical medicine major.
    • But the college I applied which is one of the best in medical proposed me to change my major to Mineral Processing because of lack of applicants.
    • In addition, another College gives me a continuous academic project offer (5 years postgraduate program in major of clinical medicine) in local.
    • I didn`t know how to do.
    • It was my first time to make big decision by myself.
    • My big sister told me that “you do know what you want like always, ask yourself, what you want?” At that time, I was so clear in my heart and I made a decision I will never be regret.

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    • About 10 years ago, I passed “Gaokao” (Chinese College Entrance Examination) and got good notes.
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    • About 10 years ago, I passed “Gaokao”, (Chinese College Entrance Examination) and gotreceived good notgrades.
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    • I didn`t have any opinion about my future and my career at that time, so I obeyed my parents orders to apply for clinical medicine major.
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    • I didn`t have any opinionknow about my future and my career at that time in terms of occupation, so I obeyed my parents' orders to apply foras a clinical medicine major.
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    • But the college I applied which is one of the best in medical proposed me to change my major to Mineral Processing because of lack of applicants.
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    • But the college I applied to, which is one of the best in the medical proposed me todepartment, insisted I change my major to "Mineral Processing" because of the lack of applicants.
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    • In addition, another College gives me a continuous academic project offer (5 years postgraduate program in major of clinical medicine) in local.
      투표하세요!
    • In addition, another Ccollege giaves me a continuousn inevitable local academic project offer. (5 years postgraduate program in major of clinical medicine) in local.
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    • My big sister told me that “you do know what you want like always, ask yourself, what you want?” At that time, I was so clear in my heart and I made a decision I will never be regret.
      투표하세요!
    • My big sister told me thatsaid, “you do know what you want like always, ask yourself, what you want?” At that time, Iit was so clear to me in my heart and Ithat I had made a decision that I will never be regret.
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