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POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ TERAZ!Niepoprawione

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  • Please correct these texts I wrote, thanks

  • It was about a teamwork project during Master 2.
    • I collaborated with other four students to study the CAES (Compressed Air Energy Storage).
    • Just before finishing the report, I proposed to make a numerical model to prefect our study, but other people thought it was good enough and didn`t want to go further.
  • I told the professor about my opinion, consulted works of other groups (different subjects) and made a rudimentary model.
    • I showed this model to other members and told the opinion of professor.
  • Finally, I succeeded in convincing my teammates to join this work and our study surprised everyone by this excellent modelization.
  • It is the response of a question in formula of GP, to describe a time when my ideas was opposed by others.
  • I don`t know it is a good response or not, thank you

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English