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添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

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    • Saturday, 5th april

    • It was the big move !
    • We took the plane at Roissy Charles de Gaulle to go to Boston.
  • We left France at 4.45 p.m.
    • I was very excited because it was the first time I took the plane.
  • I was a little bit worried.
    • I had the chance to be next to the window.
    • It was very stunning because the plane was pretty fast and we went above the clouds quickly.
    • In the plane, I watched three movies (seven hours in the plane) and I really liked the food !
    • We arrived and our penfriends waited us at the aeroport.
    • We all took the school bus and he drove us to Foxborough.
    • Then, we left with our penfriends.
  • I was lucky because Liam, my penfriend, had his driver's license.
    • We arrived at home and I met Liam's family.
  • They were all so nice.
    • Then, he showed to me my room.
  • It was his brother's room.
    • I was impressed because it was huge !
  • I had a big bed, my own bathroom...
  • I discovered a basket with a lot of candies.
    • It was adorable !
  • Then, I went to bed because I was tired.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English