Korekty

Text from huamanhtuananh - English

  • help me check my eassay

  • you know why I do not want to travel along, because the following reasons,first of all, I think that when I go to another country to study, I not only gained achievements in the natural and social sciences.
  • The secon,I also live in a cultural environment more modern Vietnam. learn something new and interesting at anytime, anywhere, and also have the opportunity to compare the most practical way between Vietnam and other developing countries that similarities and differences in what point, people are educated and any such development.
  • And finally,it is also extremely important and no less valuable learning university knowledge, for I was so. basic subjects that I want to learn that construction works.
  • Also if possible I would learn more diplomas management, governance, so that after completion of the course, return to Vietnam I could participate in politics。I mean people tend to be independent, you need to distinguish independent and lonely it offline completely different. independence is itself you can do a lot of work, but you always think loneliness is only you exist in the world around you even though there are many relatives and classmates. as you can see, I have height superior to those kids the same age as me.
  • This is just strong but also have the disadvantage for me.
  • I tell you okay.
  • Universities such as security, police academy, generally only blocks of military recruiting candidates under 180cm in height and weighing less than 75 pounds. add to that the tables and chairs to sit in the school education in Vietnam is slightly smaller so that I can sit comfortably. it makes me uncomfortable.
  • My favorite saying of my father, he said, people with large body size as his father should live abroad for suitable.
  • So, I think this is a good opportunity for me to follow what my dad has supported me noi.ban not?
  • My house does not do very much better off, the income of my parents in average compared with the average income of Vietnamese people.
  • I parked at the university, my family quite worried about the cost but I will be in 5 years in college. but fortunately, thanks to the social welfare policies such as student loan to cover the lifetime learning, it has support for my parents to raise part. but as long as it was not enough, I want to strive more to ginhf the scholarships are worth more, which I always cherished ambition and ccoos to perform for it

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
    • you know why I do not want to travel along, because the following reasons,first of all, I think that when I go to another country to study, I not only gained achievements in the natural and social sciences.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • The secon,I also live in a cultural environment more modern Vietnam. learn something new and interesting at anytime, anywhere, and also have the opportunity to compare the most practical way between Vietnam and other developing countries that similarities and differences in what point, people are educated and any such development.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
    • And finally,it is also extremely important and no less valuable learning university knowledge, for I was so. basic subjects that I want to learn that construction works.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • Also if possible I would learn more diplomas management, governance, so that after completion of the course, return to Vietnam I could participate in politics。I mean people tend to be independent, you need to distinguish independent and lonely it offline completely different. independence is itself you can do a lot of work, but you always think loneliness is only you exist in the world around you even though there are many relatives and classmates. as you can see, I have height superior to those kids the same age as me.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
    • Universities such as security, police academy, generally only blocks of military recruiting candidates under 180cm in height and weighing less than 75 pounds. add to that the tables and chairs to sit in the school education in Vietnam is slightly smaller so that I can sit comfortably. it makes me uncomfortable.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
    • My favorite saying of my father, he said, people with large body size as his father should live abroad for suitable.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
    • My house does not do very much better off, the income of my parents in average compared with the average income of Vietnamese people.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10
  • Zdanie 11
    • I parked at the university, my family quite worried about the cost but I will be in 5 years in college. but fortunately, thanks to the social welfare policies such as student loan to cover the lifetime learning, it has support for my parents to raise part. but as long as it was not enough, I want to strive more to ginhf the scholarships are worth more, which I always cherished ambition and ccoos to perform for it
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11