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Text from huamanhtuananh - English

  • Please help me hurry

  • Hi everyone, I am very happy to come back to speak to people today. as you know, the life of every human being from small to large attached with different memories. for me, the most memorable thing was the childhood memories, many happy memories and sad memories too. and shortly I'll tell you about them-the childhood memories I will never forget the. when I was born, my family members in extremely spoiled. a little older, I received the toy as automotive electronic controls, portable aircraft, robotics, ... and some other stuff so my family bought me and by my father and uncle sent from abroad to play for me. of them, my favorite is a small three wheeled bike by my grandfather donated homemade round me when I was three years old.
  • I find it especially compared to what I've played before.
  • That night I was not so eager to sleep. from the next day onwards, I forget what the other toys and just play with each vehicle dap.toi cycling throughout the house, from the living room springboard into the dining room, the kitchen and the bedroom.
  • As they rode on, I increasingly faster bikes and more reckless, on a normal day like all days, I cycled back but unfortunately I do not pay attention when the play should have a bike ride from home to work road surface, face down on the ground, luckily no traffic then go through then maybe I was not injured more seriously.
  • While injuries from falling for my car from my mother was thrown at the vehicle near the landfill because I did not want to play anymore. the next day, when he did not know what to play when his car was not in love with you again, then I see the opposite neighbor apparently they just moved to. that strange and curious, I approached for a closer inspection, it is discovered that they have a beautiful daughter and my age. miracle has happened, you know what that is? is a three-wheel bike just looks weird just know that she is the other major player is the mother I had to throw them away but the family picked up and corrected her toys.
  • I immediately acquainted her and you know her name is Quynh Giao. all day that day we played together very happy because the tricycle. but when I told her that this is her toys and wanted to own it yourself, not for her, I immediately pulling back and rode quickly to run, she immediately cried out.
  • I still have to play the final bike with her otherwise she would have forbidden my absolute pedal tricycles.
  • Her parents buy toys for sale, I saw she was very excited.
  • Specifically, each day she dropped out of her toys arranged into a whim, and I was cycling around. but until one day I was teasing boys toys for girls, I was away. and so I immediately his feet hacked away the toys that she has put effort to put into shape before. and from now claims she does not play with anymore. she cried a lot.
  • I also think about that day a lot and felt somewhat guilty.
  • I just concern that there should apologize and go back to playing with her again. surprisingly, a few days later, when he was thinking about his job, my mom told me that your father had transferred Quynh Giao and you had to move the family to follow a few hours ago I was shocked to hear this news. but also just watched this over at her house but did not know what to do. when I was 5 years old, my mother went to kindergarten. to be able to pass me on the bus and go to school is a big problem for my mother. the reason I have a connection to the kindergarten. in that place, I was always scared of her threatening to prolong the release khoc.de, I always pretending to have stomach pain and shoes off to be at home, but as a result I still have to go to class. to 6 years old, in first grade, I was not feeling all nervous and anxious when faced with schools, teachers, you be.nhung first day, after my mother took me to class and then come back, I clung mother clutching expressed not want to be left alone.
  • I just stood looking at my mother just recently cowardly move outwards, and when my mom walked past the school gate I cried. memories in a class I had to leave for the first anniversary and also the most unforgettable memories during student.
  • My boarding school, and every afternoon when the signal concentration when eating lunch or going to bed, I miss home.
  • I always get the pair you cin food from my heart rice.
  • I used to be the bully boys and I did not dare tell my parents. time went by, I slowly gradually overcome the difficulties and to live now. as an adult.
  • I see memories of this very valuable and it's helped me live better and have the energy.
  • I remember the songs and most of the time it's goodbye dolls, but now I do not want to hear it anymore because it makes me feel sad I say that you find right or wrong ? thank everyone who has heard

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Titolo
  • Frazo 1
    • Hi everyone, I am very happy to come back to speak to people today. as you know, the life of every human being from small to large attached with different memories. for me, the most memorable thing was the childhood memories, many happy memories and sad memories too. and shortly I'll tell you about them-the childhood memories I will never forget the. when I was born, my family members in extremely spoiled. a little older, I received the toy as automotive electronic controls, portable aircraft, robotics, ... and some other stuff so my family bought me and by my father and uncle sent from abroad to play for me. of them, my favorite is a small three wheeled bike by my grandfather donated homemade round me when I was three years old.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • That night I was not so eager to sleep. from the next day onwards, I forget what the other toys and just play with each vehicle dap.toi cycling throughout the house, from the living room springboard into the dining room, the kitchen and the bedroom.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • As they rode on, I increasingly faster bikes and more reckless, on a normal day like all days, I cycled back but unfortunately I do not pay attention when the play should have a bike ride from home to work road surface, face down on the ground, luckily no traffic then go through then maybe I was not injured more seriously.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • While injuries from falling for my car from my mother was thrown at the vehicle near the landfill because I did not want to play anymore. the next day, when he did not know what to play when his car was not in love with you again, then I see the opposite neighbor apparently they just moved to. that strange and curious, I approached for a closer inspection, it is discovered that they have a beautiful daughter and my age. miracle has happened, you know what that is? is a three-wheel bike just looks weird just know that she is the other major player is the mother I had to throw them away but the family picked up and corrected her toys.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • I immediately acquainted her and you know her name is Quynh Giao. all day that day we played together very happy because the tricycle. but when I told her that this is her toys and wanted to own it yourself, not for her, I immediately pulling back and rode quickly to run, she immediately cried out.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • Specifically, each day she dropped out of her toys arranged into a whim, and I was cycling around. but until one day I was teasing boys toys for girls, I was away. and so I immediately his feet hacked away the toys that she has put effort to put into shape before. and from now claims she does not play with anymore. she cried a lot.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
    • I just concern that there should apologize and go back to playing with her again. surprisingly, a few days later, when he was thinking about his job, my mom told me that your father had transferred Quynh Giao and you had to move the family to follow a few hours ago I was shocked to hear this news. but also just watched this over at her house but did not know what to do. when I was 5 years old, my mother went to kindergarten. to be able to pass me on the bus and go to school is a big problem for my mother. the reason I have a connection to the kindergarten. in that place, I was always scared of her threatening to prolong the release khoc.de, I always pretending to have stomach pain and shoes off to be at home, but as a result I still have to go to class. to 6 years old, in first grade, I was not feeling all nervous and anxious when faced with schools, teachers, you be.nhung first day, after my mother took me to class and then come back, I clung mother clutching expressed not want to be left alone.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
    • I just stood looking at my mother just recently cowardly move outwards, and when my mom walked past the school gate I cried. memories in a class I had to leave for the first anniversary and also the most unforgettable memories during student.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
  • Frazo 13
    • My boarding school, and every afternoon when the signal concentration when eating lunch or going to bed, I miss home.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13
  • Frazo 14
  • Frazo 15
    • I used to be the bully boys and I did not dare tell my parents. time went by, I slowly gradually overcome the difficulties and to live now. as an adult.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 15
  • Frazo 16
  • Frazo 17
    • I remember the songs and most of the time it's goodbye dolls, but now I do not want to hear it anymore because it makes me feel sad I say that you find right or wrong ? thank everyone who has heard
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 17ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 17