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Text from lailard - English

  • Live Is Very Brief

  • This live is very brief for me to short, so I don't try to shorter again.
  • When the day yesterday gone leave me, so in my front is today.
  • I will try make my self to don't be sad in the day yesterday because the day yesterday wouldn't comeback again for me, that's mean will far leave me to forever.
  • I will try to not regret again for the day yesterday.
  • I believe that tomorrow, i will get a happiness well than yesterday.
  • I will focus to my future to be good in my profesi as a nurse who care with the patient s and them families and also I will make effort to get what i want.
  • When I am in good position, i never leave my parent who always support me and pay all my study as a nurse until now I am like this.
  • The first person who I remember when I am to be success are my parents , I never forget them until I am dead.
  • Because of them, i can like this.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English