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  • February 1st

  • Today is Friday, February 1st.
    • Today the weather is cold, now I wear stockings, jacket and sweater.
    • I'm talking with Xiomy, Vivi, Mile and Karolette together, everybody are feeling so cold.
    • At night, I and Xiomy will get together for decorate my room, last night we cut hearts, and fluorescent hearts, stars, sun, moon.
    • This morning, Xiomy remembered who she didn't her homework, and I did my homework, then she copy my job, later she gave me a chocolat egg, we shared.
    • I love take the Daddy's tie and wearing, I don't know but when I do it, my mommy get angry.
    • In this time I want a chocolate cup, but I need be in the bakery on time.
    • I just pride of Xiomy, today we started to practice the school play I saw her without fear.
    • The Saturday, February 2nd, we will be choosing extracurricular activites for the school, I love cooking and language class, Xiomy want PE class (Soccer), Karolette want arts class, and Mile still doesn't know that choose.

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    • At night, I and Xiomy will get together for decorate my room, last night we cut hearts, and fluorescent hearts, stars, sun, moon.
      투표하세요!
    • At Tonight, I and Xiomy and I will get together forto decorate my room, l. Last night we cut hearts, and fluorescent hearts, stars, a sun, and a moon.
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    • At night, I and Xiomy and I will get together forto-night to decorate my room,. We cut last night we cut hearts, and fluorescent hearts, stars, sun, and moon.
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    • This morning, Xiomy remembered who she didn't her homework, and I did my homework, then she copy my job, later she gave me a chocolat egg, we shared.
      투표하세요!
    • This morning, Xiomy remembered whothat she didn't her homework, and as I did my homework, then sI let her copy my job, lwork. Later she gave me a chocolate egg, which we shared.
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    • This morning, Xiomy remembered whothis morning that she didn't do her homework, and. I did my homework, thenso she copy my job, later sied mine. She gave me later a chocolate egg, which we shared.
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    • I just pride of Xiomy, today we started to practice the school play I saw her without fear.
      투표하세요!
    • I just pride'm proud of Xiomy, today we startedbegan to practice the school play and I saw that sher withoutas fearless.
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    • I just pride of Xiomy, today w'm proud of Xiomy. We started to-day to practice the school play I saw and sher withoutas fearless.
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    • The Saturday, February 2nd, we will be choosing extracurricular activites for the school, I love cooking and language class, Xiomy want PE class (Soccer), Karolette want arts class, and Mile still doesn't know that choose.
      투표하세요!
    • TheOn Saturday, February 2nd, we will be choosing extracurricular activites for the school,. I love cooking and language class, Xiomy wants PE class (Soccer), Karolette want arts class, and Mile still doesn't know twhat to choose. ¶
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    • TheWe shall be choosing on Saturday, February 2nd, we will be choosingschool extracurricular activities. for the school, I love cooking and language classes, Xiomy wants PE class, (Soccer), Karolette wants arts class, and Mile still doesn't know twhat to choose. ¶
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