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first time here
hi 'im ivan, it's my first time here, i like to improve my english...
today i'm came back from milano with my girlfriend, she study there, we have travel on my car, then around 12 o'clock we was stopped in padova to make some shopping.........

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- today i'm came back from milano with my girlfriend, she study there, we have travel on my car, then around 12 o'clock we was stopped in padova to make some shopping.........
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