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Text from whiterose1 - English

  • A Cake

  • A foreign language is like a little dragon living in your mind.
  • Even if you feed him every day, it would still always be hungry.
    • Guess it's better to kill him.
    • But my heart weak to do that, and it still with me.
    • and now we put the second candle in its cake.
    • my english book.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English