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  • N.Y

    • Today I'm going to explain you one of my best voyages at one my favorite cites: New York.
    • The voyage take place on April of 2011.
    • We take a delta A-330 airplane at Barcelona and we were at N.Y eight hour later.
    • This was the longest day in my life due to the jet-lack.
    • When we arrived there, we spent almost two hours at the immigration controls of the airport.
    • From there, we take a private bus direct to the hotel.
  • The second day, with the same mini-bus, we had a tour around the city so we could have a perspective of the differences between the diverse parts of the city.
  • In the following days, we visited lots of places: the fifth avenue, some emblematic shops (we bought almost nothing), some museums like the Met museum, MoMA and others, central park, little Italy, China town,...
  • We also went to Broadway to see the Phantom of the Opera (which I love) and to the Metropolitan Opera House, this days, performing La Traviata from Verdi.
  • But what I enjoyed the most, was The Intrepid Sea, Air & Space Museum.
  • It's an old aircraft carrier converted into a museum.
  • There are some helicopters, one space shuttle, some military planes such as the F-16, the F18 hornet and the Blackbird, developed some years earlier in the 51 Area.
  • You can visit the interior of the incredible and huge ship what is very interesting too.
  • Outside the ship but at the same place, there is a British Airways' Concorde and the unique nuclear powered submarine in which I entered too.
  • It was claustrophobic inside but I liked it too.
  • Six or seven days after our arrival at N.Y, we had to leave.
  • The return flight was marvelous. Why?
    • Because we return in the Air France A-380, the biggest commercial plane in the hole world.
    • I enjoyed very much the flight because of the plane.
  • I'm anxious to repeat it someday.
    • In conclusion, a travel to remember with my family and my cousins.

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