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Hello everyone!!!!
Hi.
My name is Ryo.
- I'm a Japanese I live in Japan now.
If you are interested in Japan, write me please.
If you come to Japan, tell me :) I can help you.

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- Hello everyone!!!!
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- Hi.
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- My name is Ryo.
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- I'm a Japanese I live in Japan now.
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- I'm a Japanese , and I live in Japan now.
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- If you are interested in Japan, write me please.
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- If you come to Japan, tell me :) I can help you.
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