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  • my awkward day

  • I woke up this morning not to be late for my appointment.I wore a pretty tiny red dress with my jacket because it was a suny day.Then,i got out of my flat and took the underground,but as some days,it was overcrowded.I was trying to get in when suddenly i fell down because of the people.I was lying down on the floor with my dress on my back,and people were able to see my underwears...some children were laughing at me,then i felt really hurt.
    • A young man helped me to get up and get in the metro.I thanked him,and finally arrived late for my appointment.

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    • I woke up this morning not to be late for my appointment.I wore a pretty tiny red dress with my jacket because it was a suny day.Then,i got out of my flat and took the underground,but as some days,it was overcrowded.I was trying to get in when suddenly i fell down because of the people.I was lying down on the floor with my dress on my back,and people were able to see my underwears...some children were laughing at me,then i felt really hurt.
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