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  • A Small Fly

    • There was a small fly that entered from one of the windows of the car.
  • And after a while, she wanted to get out from the same window which was closed.
    • She rotated around it from the left to the right from the top to the bottom to get out but no there for hope.
    • She kept trying that till got tired and exhausted her energy and died.
    • The strange thing was that all the other windows of the car and all the other doors were open, but she did not try to look for any other way to get out and insisted on one way and she has been used over and over again until she died.
    • Lesson of the story: If you don't have a flexible plan that willing to change when you face the challenges and difficulties.
    • It could be tear you down, as what happened with the small fly

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    • She rotated around it from the left to the right from the top to the bottom to get out but no there for hope.
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    • She rotatedflew around it from the left to the right from the top to the bottom to get out but no there forit was hope.less
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    • The strange thing was that all the other windows of the car and all the other doors were open, but she did not try to look for any other way to get out and insisted on one way and she has been used over and over again until she died.
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    • The strange thing was that all the other windows of the car and all the other doors were open, but she did not try to look for any other way to get out and insisted on one way and she has been usonly which she tried over and over again until she died.
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    • Lesson of the story: If you don't have a flexible plan that willing to change when you face the challenges and difficulties.
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    • Lesson of the story: If you don't have a flexible plan that willing to change when you face the challenges and difficulties.Be flexible in your planning and prepared to compromise¶
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