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  • Mini Essay: Pros and Cons of Using Cars

  • One cannot argue, that a problem with huge amount of cars became critical around the world.
  • At the same time, governments of the world are trying to solve this problem.
  • This essay is going to discuss problems, which are causing by cars, and suggest possible solutions for them.
  • It is no doubt, that means of transport are essential part of the modern life.
  • These not only have positive effects on quality of people's lives, but also these are negatively affected the health of people and the traffic in cities.
  • Since the air is being polluted, citizens are acquiring chronicle disease such as allergy, asthma or other lung problems.
  • Also commuting has become uneasy since there are traffic jams in the rush hours.
  • As a result, people are spending hours in a transport instead of working.
  • Thus, cars became the problem for people living in a city.
  • Moreover, the negative effect on people’s lives can be decreased whether the government takes actions.
  • First of all, the international law should be established which radically decreases level of harmful exhaust of cars and limited amount of cars allowed in cities.
  • As well as preferences can be set for electrical cars and alternative types of transports.
  • As a result, these could cause a decreasing amount of cars on the streets and pollution of the air.
  • In conclusion, there are problems with cars around the globe such as the health problems and the time wasting in jams.
  • I think that laws should be established which is limited cars in the world as well as reduce car’s harmful exhaust.

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