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  • • Please check • Often people will still believe that if men fail to take up the cause .
  • • But I think the only career loss less fortunate .
  • • To take the new family is the failure of the husband is .
  • • With a view to take up a career who is the loser , the value of man is identical with authority , money ...
  • • , the first expression of masculine strength .
  • • But I think , men or males have more power if it 's just luck .
  • • Fortunately, in the sense that there is good , no it does not matter .
  • • Those who did not approve of this idea that shows finance career and location of man . No false .
  • • But not only need to finance a new career and location .
  • • The preserve , protect and develop their happy family requires no less ingenious .
  • • Family categories appear very early in human history and is an important institution related to the activities of the society and the individual .
  • • People will not be happy if the lack of family warmth family home is the greatest happiness that we once had , where we are caring loving parents , worried , happy family is the most precious thing in life , without it we could not live and grew up , where the family is protecting us and help us in difficult times and shared the sad feeling happy , do not do justice to a tingle of such feeling as if broken home you'll feel lonely sadness and depression outside the family but we also have friends but foreign literature says "Family , family friends rather than " let 's appreciate what we have because there is nothing in this world is valuable and what is not perfect and forever .
  • • Because once you do take the time to rethink know that regret , so let 's appreciate what you yourself are okay .
  • • also a philosophical wire The family is a safe house for shelter in our lives .
  • • For our family meals, warm, loving but remember when everyone went away .
  • • The family is where we learn to love , wan center , ng care other than ourselves out .
  • • Family is where we learned a way of life , communication tips Zoi community .
  • • Family , where I can confide .
  • • The family is the spiritual and physical best when we collapse .
  • • The family is 1fan small society , polymorphism , want to post interesting .
  • • in short, for me family is the most precious thing in life me.there nothing can replace the

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    • • Family categories appear very early in human history and is an important institution related to the activities of the society and the individual .
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    • • People will not be happy if the lack of family warmth family home is the greatest happiness that we once had , where we are caring loving parents , worried , happy family is the most precious thing in life , without it we could not live and grew up , where the family is protecting us and help us in difficult times and shared the sad feeling happy , do not do justice to a tingle of such feeling as if broken home you'll feel lonely sadness and depression outside the family but we also have friends but foreign literature says "Family , family friends rather than " let 's appreciate what we have because there is nothing in this world is valuable and what is not perfect and forever .
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    • • Because once you do take the time to rethink know that regret , so let 's appreciate what you yourself are okay .
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