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  • January 30th

  • Today is Wednesday, January 30th.
  • Today I took Art class at 8 o'clock, I said to Xiomy, why we will do a cat ears?, then, we did a beautiful ears, and now we are taking a systems class with cat ears.
  • When I look up to Xiomy, she's putting a smile on my face.
  • Since I met her, I changed my style and her style.
  • At the rest, I eat a piece pineapple, after class, I want to go to watch a movie at cinema, 'cause Xiomy don't talk so good Spanish, I need, I wish teach to her to talk Spanish.
  • Later of this class, I'm going to help a boy with a girl from my class, he's in love of her but he needs help 'cause he is fearful.
  • When I met to Xiomy, I didn't need help, she gave me a kiss on the bathroom and said: "sorry", but I like that and open my eyes.
  • she is Swiss, 'cause I want to learn French, when she talk on her language, I like but I don't understand.
  • The Monday, came to school a religious group (old women and men) to talk over sexuality, then I don't pay attention to them.
  • Later, they divide the class on couples, I chose for Xiomy and they got angry.
  • After, they went to bring some dolls, and gave to each couples, but they didn't gave to us.
  • I got so angry, I got out of class and Xiomy tried to calm me and she got it.
  • After I came back to class, and I said to everybody: "I don't care" but in myself, "I felt so bad", but with I said in the principle of the text: she put a smile on my face.

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