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- Hy, I'm new member, and I would like find a correspondant to progress in english and to regulary exchange.
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- Hyi, I'm new member, and I would like find a ~~correspondant~~penpal to impro~~gress~~ve in eEnglish and to ~~regulary exchange~~exchange regulary. ¶
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