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    • Divergent (spoil)

    • Hello everyone, my name is Nicolas and yesterday I watched Divergent which came out in France 4 days ago (I do not know if it is the same in the Usa or in an other English speaking country).
    • This movie is about a next future where war destroyed the most part of the world.
    • Then, 5 factions have been created in order to keep peace and not to make war again.
    • There are the erudite (the intelligent), the amity (the peacefull), the dauntless ( the brave), the Candor ( the honest) and the abnegation ( the selfless) Everything was alright till a girl, called Beatrice, then Trys found out she was a Divergent.
    • That is to say, she is not destined to belong to only one faction but all of them !
    • Then the day where she must choose her faction ( that will be a definitive choice) She chose the Dauntless ( much to the annoyance of her parents who belong to the abnegation) Then she will work hard not to be given up and become a factionless (which are repudiated) or to be killed because her divergence is dangerous.
    • Then she will fall in love with Four , one of the leaders of the Dauntless.
  • She figures out she has been manipulated by the government, her and all her crowd.
  • But because she is a divergent ( and so Four), she is not able to be brainwashed and she will destroy the empire.
    • The movies is based on a three-book story.

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    • Hello everyone, my name is Nicolas and yesterday I watched Divergent which came out in France 4 days ago (I do not know if it is the same in the Usa or in an other English speaking country).
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    • Hello everyone, my name is Nicolas, and yesterday I watched Divergent, which came out in France 4 days ago (I do not know if it is the same in the UsaSA or in an other English speaking country).
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1
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    • There are the erudite (the intelligent), the amity (the peacefull), the dauntless ( the brave), the Candor ( the honest) and the abnegation ( the selfless) Everything was alright till a girl, called Beatrice, then Trys found out she was a Divergent.
      Vote now!
    • There are the erudite (the intelligent), the amity (the peacefull), the dauntless ( the brave), the Candor ( the honest) and the abnegation ( the selfless).¶Everything was alright untill a girl, called Beatrice, then Trys foufinds out she was a Divergent.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4
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    • Then the day where she must choose her faction ( that will be a definitive choice) She chose the Dauntless ( much to the annoyance of her parents who belong to the abnegation) Then she will work hard not to be given up and become a factionless (which are repudiated) or to be killed because her divergence is dangerous.
      Vote now!
    • Then the day comeswhere she must choose her faction ( that will be a definitive choice).¶She chose the Dauntless ( much to the annoyance of her parents who belong to the abnegation).¶Then she will works hard not to be given up and become a factionless (which are repudiated) or to be killed because her divergence is dangerous.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6
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