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    • Hello hanan Last time you ask me about my free time , i was wonder if i wiil find some special things to tell you , but as you see i am obliged to answer your question .
    • I will begin with my favourite hobbie that is paintng , this hobbie helps me to find my way when i feel lost, to organise my idea in my mind, and to be confortable .
    • Also I like to play computer game specialy with my cousin , Ayoub and I , we share a lot of amazing memories : we surfed internet together , we watched TV toogether but he didn't like to watch korean drama with me he think that's a girly thing but i disagree with him .I like also to have a wonderful time with my friends and my familly specialy at summer and i hope that we'll have a great moments in the futur holidays .
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    • Hello hanan Last time you ask me about my free time , i was wonder if i wiil find some special things to tell you , but as you see i am obliged to answer your question .
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    • Hello hanan¶Last time you asked me about my free time , i was wondering if i wiil find some special things to tell you , but as you see i am obliged to answer your question .
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    • I will begin with my favourite hobbie that is paintng , this hobbie helps me to find my way when i feel lost, to organise my idea in my mind, and to be confortable .
      赶紧投票吧!
    • I will begin with my favourite hobbiey that is paintng , this hobbie yhelps me to find my way when i feel lost, to organise my idea in my mind, and to be confortable .
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    • Also I like to play computer game specialy with my cousin , Ayoub and I , we share a lot of amazing memories : we surfed internet together , we watched TV toogether but he didn't like to watch korean drama with me he think that's a girly thing but i disagree with him .I like also to have a wonderful time with my friends and my familly specialy at summer and i hope that we'll have a great moments in the futur holidays .
      赶紧投票吧!
    • Also I like to play computer games specialy with my cousin ,. Ayoub and I , we share a lot of amazing memories : we surfed internet together , we watched TV toogether but he didn't like to watch korean drama with me he think that's a girly thing but i disagree with him .I like also to have a wonderful timealso like having fun with my friends and my familly specialy at summer and i hope that we'll have a great moments in the futur holidays .
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