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  • Hatred

    • I dont like people being rude to others without any reason.People has changed alot,if you do something good to them,in time of need they will become happy but when you need there help they will turn their backs on you.i think if everyone starts to feel a little humble and sweet towards eachother the hatred from this world can be removed very easily.

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    • I dont like people being rude to others without any reason.People has changed alot,if you do something good to them,in time of need they will become happy but when you need there help they will turn their backs on you.i think if everyone starts to feel a little humble and sweet towards eachother the hatred from this world can be removed very easily.
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    • I don't like people being rude to others without any reason. People hasve changed a lot,if you do something good to them, in time of need, they will become happy, but when you need theire help they will turn their backs on you.i I think if everyone starts to feel a little humble and sweet towards each other then the hatred from this world can be removed very easily.
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