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Text from Hajar96 - English

  • The Greater Aid

    • In Morocco we celebrate different events such as Imichil festival , Aid Al fitr .... but the perfect event for me is Aid el Adha .
    • So what's Aid El Adha ? and how people celebrate it ?
    • Aid El Adha is an religious event , every Muslim is obliged to buy a sheep in it , but it isn't necessary for poor people ,because the goal of this event it is not the sheep but it's to remember every Muslim how Ibrahim ( a messenger ) was ready to sacrifice his son Ismail , and also how the son was ready too to be sacrificed as an act of submission to God's command , before God then intervened to provide Abraham with a lamb to sacrifice instead .
    • The greater Aid is celebrated each year , is falls on the 10th day of Dhu al-Hijjah ( Islamic calendar ) and lasts for three days .
    • Moroccan people were glad to celebrate Aid El Adha , for them it's an important event .
    • In its morning Muslims go to the mosque to pray the prayer of the Aid , after coming back home they slaughter the sheep in the Islamic way .
    • the GREATER AID is an opportunity to visit family and also friends , to enjoy with them and to help poor people .. that's why I prefer it , it's an event that make every one happy and glad to celebrate it .

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    • In Morocco we celebrate different events such as Imichil festival , Aid Al fitr .... but the perfect event for me is Aid el Adha .
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    • In Morocco, we celebrate different events such as Imichil festival , Aid Al fitr .... but the perfect event for me is Aid el Adha .
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    • Aid El Adha is an religious event , every Muslim is obliged to buy a sheep in it , but it isn't necessary for poor people ,because the goal of this event it is not the sheep but it's to remember every Muslim how Ibrahim ( a messenger ) was ready to sacrifice his son Ismail , and also how the son was ready too to be sacrificed as an act of submission to God's command , before God then intervened to provide Abraham with a lamb to sacrifice instead .
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    • Aid El Adha is an religious event , e. Every Muslim is obliged to buy a sheep in it during the event, but it isn't necessary for poor people. This is ,because the goal of this event it is not the sheep, but it'snstead to remember every Muslim of how Ibrahim ( a messenger ) was ready to sacrifice his son Ismail , and also how the son was also ready too to be sacrificed as an act of submission to God's command , b. Before God then intervened to provide Abraham with a lamb to sacrifice instead .
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    • The greater Aid is celebrated each year , is falls on the 10th day of Dhu al-Hijjah ( Islamic calendar ) and lasts for three days .
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    • The greater Aid is celebrated eachvery year , is. It falls on the 10th day of Dhu al-Hijjah ( Islamic calendar ) and lasts for three days .
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    • In its morning Muslims go to the mosque to pray the prayer of the Aid , after coming back home they slaughter the sheep in the Islamic way .
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    • In its morning, Muslims go to the mosque to pray the prayer of the Aid , a. After coming back home they slaughter the sheep in the Islamic way .
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    • the GREATER AID is an opportunity to visit family and also friends , to enjoy with them and to help poor people .. that's why I prefer it , it's an event that make every one happy and glad to celebrate it .
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    • tThe GREATER AID is an opportunity to visit family and also friends , to enjoy with them and to help poor people .. that's why I prefer it ,; it's an event that make every one happy and glad to celebrate it .
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