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    • My trip to West Coast in USA

    • My last trip was West Coast in Usa.
    • It was in April last year (2013).
    • My friends and i were in a lot of places of California State.
    • In Los Angeles we visit to Beverly Hills, kodak theatre, stars street, universial studios, six flags magic mountain....
    • We was very happy, and our friendship was more strong after twenty five days together.
    • When my text are corrected by you then i will continue to write about my travel.
  • :) Regards from Spain! Felipe

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