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Testo da huamanhtuananh - English

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  • Vietnam has a poem talk about define Internal,writen by Nguyen Khoa Diem, they are following: "When we was born, the Country had existed The Country is in the “once upon a time” that Mum gossipy The Country began with the betel that Grandmother is eating now The Country is growing up when our people know planted the bamboo to fight invaders Mum ‘s hair is digged behind her head Parent love each other by hot ginger and salt the rafter,the column became name thr rice was dried a double sun dew, grinding, pounding, slowly, ready the Country was exist since that… land is where Man go to school water is where Woman took a shower The Country is where we dating The Country is where woman dropped the handkerchief in Me whisper Lan is where the phoenix flied to white mountain Water is where Fishman manicure the sea Painful of time Immense space The Country is where our people reunion Land is where birds come Water is where dragon stay Lac Long Quan and Au Co Bonr our people in roes" I have my country, you have your country,this is one of the different things afford to us.
  • In primitive times, to exist, the person only need food from chase and gatherer.
  • But on modern today.
  • Noi only each person but also all countries property these things belongs to them ; .
  • I think God and natural very affair when not creat a country absolute strenth or weak.
  • Example as Vietnam, our country has mineral very much but suffer lag about economic cause consequences of war to the.
  • Your country although poor mineral but return person motivation striving, breakthrough and creative.
  • Although I haven’t have knowledge of manage and leadership,but I believe that,if all country in the world link each other, exchange bilateral comprehensive across all sectors then our world will Date gasoline nice.
  • But it is theory only, while in fact no such place entirely. in development theory and natural selection, Darwin wrote, "the loiaf want to survive and grow to compete with other species." people too. but we are different in that they have a sense of competition Vietnam is a small country, the poor, the backward agriculture, economic development has not always been vulnerable to large countries pinched. add to that the idea of an Asian country, which is conservative, stagnant, respected cultural ideology of his father's generation left, the former should lead to difficulty absorbing the world advanced State party and we set out strategic objectives are striving 2020 Vietnam became the industrialization and modernization. but according to me, as a young intellectual man, I confirm that this is the phase, period doped cultural stuff most complex social ccuar Vietnam ddeeens this before, and heard above the target as long as possible if not just look at Vietnam now reality advance innovation in Vietnam in 1996, a population of over 30 million, mainly proletariat, the workers.
  • 1996 after innovation, social fragmentation of ownership of productive assets, and the result is before the rich getting richer and the poor now it is even worse off I personally, was caused by the policy regimes of the Vietnamese government apparatus can not be used at this time reasonably to be more roi.Viet Nam fighting tradition that no other country in the biet.nhung world this is also the weakness of the government apparatus Vietnam.
  • They think that a good soldier fought it also has the ability to make economic good.This not hear very reasonable!
  • Think if I keep this momentum thif never know new people get out of poverty.
  • knowing that anything new will face opposition, but the new one comes along that if the fight becomes the cu.toi said that although a bit confusing but it's true in Vietnam you dear I think that is the motto of a modern leader, always know moi.va create a new one which of course must be based on the achievements of the government in world history.
  • As in Japan, Japanese Emperor figure out how to improve height for your children sterilized by all men, and for foreigners to conduct the survival of the species Of course, if I was the leader in self-location tuwownh I just see it as a way to refer not entirely applicable.
  • As the country I live in is Vietnam, not Japan's Ban.ca I see my government over the years has done nothing significant to his people ca.neu power in my hands to reform the entire government apparatus with the largest scale to date on all the fields. you know why I do so not from babies to adults, my parents always taught honesty directed Phat.cho until now I always returned to these things, though I do not fully understand how the machinery of government organizations in Vietnam.
  • You want to know what I will do for my country and other countries around the world it? the answer is that it is quite similar to what the country has helped you develop as we now so

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    • Vietnam has a poem talk about define Internal,writen by Nguyen Khoa Diem, they are following: "When we was born, the Country had existed The Country is in the “once upon a time” that Mum gossipy The Country began with the betel that Grandmother is eating now The Country is growing up when our people know planted the bamboo to fight invaders Mum ‘s hair is digged behind her head Parent love each other by hot ginger and salt the rafter,the column became name thr rice was dried a double sun dew, grinding, pounding, slowly, ready the Country was exist since that… land is where Man go to school water is where Woman took a shower The Country is where we dating The Country is where woman dropped the handkerchief in Me whisper Lan is where the phoenix flied to white mountain Water is where Fishman manicure the sea Painful of time Immense space The Country is where our people reunion Land is where birds come Water is where dragon stay Lac Long Quan and Au Co Bonr our people in roes" I have my country, you have your country,this is one of the different things afford to us.
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    • Although I haven’t have knowledge of manage and leadership,but I believe that,if all country in the world link each other, exchange bilateral comprehensive across all sectors then our world will Date gasoline nice.
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    • But it is theory only, while in fact no such place entirely. in development theory and natural selection, Darwin wrote, "the loiaf want to survive and grow to compete with other species." people too. but we are different in that they have a sense of competition Vietnam is a small country, the poor, the backward agriculture, economic development has not always been vulnerable to large countries pinched. add to that the idea of an Asian country, which is conservative, stagnant, respected cultural ideology of his father's generation left, the former should lead to difficulty absorbing the world advanced State party and we set out strategic objectives are striving 2020 Vietnam became the industrialization and modernization. but according to me, as a young intellectual man, I confirm that this is the phase, period doped cultural stuff most complex social ccuar Vietnam ddeeens this before, and heard above the target as long as possible if not just look at Vietnam now reality advance innovation in Vietnam in 1996, a population of over 30 million, mainly proletariat, the workers.
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    • 1996 after innovation, social fragmentation of ownership of productive assets, and the result is before the rich getting richer and the poor now it is even worse off I personally, was caused by the policy regimes of the Vietnamese government apparatus can not be used at this time reasonably to be more roi.Viet Nam fighting tradition that no other country in the biet.nhung world this is also the weakness of the government apparatus Vietnam.
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    • knowing that anything new will face opposition, but the new one comes along that if the fight becomes the cu.toi said that although a bit confusing but it's true in Vietnam you dear I think that is the motto of a modern leader, always know moi.va create a new one which of course must be based on the achievements of the government in world history.
      Vota adesso!
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    • As in Japan, Japanese Emperor figure out how to improve height for your children sterilized by all men, and for foreigners to conduct the survival of the species Of course, if I was the leader in self-location tuwownh I just see it as a way to refer not entirely applicable.
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 14AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 14
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    • As the country I live in is Vietnam, not Japan's Ban.ca I see my government over the years has done nothing significant to his people ca.neu power in my hands to reform the entire government apparatus with the largest scale to date on all the fields. you know why I do so not from babies to adults, my parents always taught honesty directed Phat.cho until now I always returned to these things, though I do not fully understand how the machinery of government organizations in Vietnam.
      Vota adesso!
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    • You want to know what I will do for my country and other countries around the world it? the answer is that it is quite similar to what the country has helped you develop as we now so
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    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 16AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 16