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    • I personally, was caused by the policy regimes of the Vietnamese government apparatus can not be used at this time reasonably to be more roi.Viet Nam fighting tradition that no other country in the biet.nhung world this is also the weakness of the government apparatus Vietnam.
    • They think that a good soldier fought it also has the ability to make economic good.This not hear very reasonable!
    • Think if I keep this momentum thif never know new people get out of poverty.
    • knowing that anything new will face opposition, but the new one comes along that if the fight becomes the cu.toi said that although a bit confusing but it's true in Vietnam you dear I think that is the motto of a modern leader, always know moi.va create a new one which of course must be based on the achievements of the government in world history.
    • As in Japan, Japanese Emperor figure out how to improve height for your children sterilized by all men, and for foreigners to conduct the survival of the species Of course, if I was the leader in self-location tuwownh I just see it as a way to refer not entirely applicable.
    • As the country I live in is Vietnam, not Japan's Ban.ca I see my government over the years has done nothing significant to his people ca.neu power in my hands to reform the entire government apparatus with the largest scale to date on all the fields. you know why I do so not from babies to adults, my parents always taught honesty directed Phat.cho until now I always returned to these things, though I do not fully understand how the machinery of government organizations in Vietnam.
    • You want to know what I will do for my country and other countries around the world it? the answer is that it is quite similar to what the country has helped you develop as we now so My comments here are links quna rawnhf interaction have qua.nhung's first rule I have to help those most close to me, it's my country farmers.
    • My heart always good, when I became more and more powerful, I have the opportunity to realize his dream, which is to save people happy, I will not say specifically what you do because I see it a bit far away from a guy like my students.
    • however, the perspective and direction I can strive crab summarized as follows: first: the successful career I will spend a lot of time and money of my own to help repel famine, poverty , and even I can use his fortune to contribute to country if the national budget is not sufficient for the development of social policy refer to the second mode of policy leaders ahead of other countries to reform their own way and eventually seek to help the underdeveloped countries by reasonable measures I know his desire hardly feasible, but I always believed that I would one nagyf achieved early success as a foundation for motivation higher development

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  • Sentence 1
    • I personally, was caused by the policy regimes of the Vietnamese government apparatus can not be used at this time reasonably to be more roi.Viet Nam fighting tradition that no other country in the biet.nhung world this is also the weakness of the government apparatus Vietnam.
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    • I personally, was causaffected by the policy regimes of the Vietnamese government apparatus can not be used at this time reasonably to be more roi.Viet Nam. The Vietnamese fighting tradition that nis different to other countryies in the 'biet. nhung' world: this is also the weakness of the government apparatus VietnamVietnamese government.
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  • Sentence 2
    • They think that a good soldier fought it also has the ability to make economic good.This not hear very reasonable!
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    • They think that a good soldier fought it also has the abilcan both fight and also benefity to makhe economic good.This not heary. This is not very reasonable!
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  • Sentence 4
    • knowing that anything new will face opposition, but the new one comes along that if the fight becomes the cu.toi said that although a bit confusing but it's true in Vietnam you dear I think that is the motto of a modern leader, always know moi.va create a new one which of course must be based on the achievements of the government in world history.
      Vote now!
    • ¶kKnowing that anything new will face opposition, but the new onenew rebels? comes along that if the fight becomes the 'cu. toi' said that although a bit confusing but it's true in Vietnam you dear.¶I think that is the motto of a modern leader,; always know 'moi. va', create a new one which of course must be based on the achievements of the government in world history.
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  • Sentence 5
    • As in Japan, Japanese Emperor figure out how to improve height for your children sterilized by all men, and for foreigners to conduct the survival of the species Of course, if I was the leader in self-location tuwownh I just see it as a way to refer not entirely applicable.
      Vote now!
    • As in Japan,Take the Japanese example; the Japanese Emperor figures out how to improve the height for yourall children sterilized by all men, and for foreigners to conduct the survival of the species. (??? you mean reproduce?)¶Of course, if I was the leader in self-location 'tuwownh' I just see it as a way to refer not entirely applicable.
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  • Sentence 6
    • As the country I live in is Vietnam, not Japan's Ban.ca I see my government over the years has done nothing significant to his people ca.neu power in my hands to reform the entire government apparatus with the largest scale to date on all the fields. you know why I do so not from babies to adults, my parents always taught honesty directed Phat.cho until now I always returned to these things, though I do not fully understand how the machinery of government organizations in Vietnam.
      Vote now!
    • As the country I live in is Vietnam, not Japan's 'Ban. ca', I see my government over the years has done nothing significant tofor his people 'ca. neu' power in my hands to reform the entire government apparatus with the largest scale to date oin all the fielddomains. yYou know why I do so not¶from babies to adults, my parents always taught honesty directed 'Phat. cho' until now I always returned to these things, though I do not fully understand how the machinery of government organizations work in Vietnam.
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  • Sentence 7
    • You want to know what I will do for my country and other countries around the world it? the answer is that it is quite similar to what the country has helped you develop as we now so My comments here are links quna rawnhf interaction have qua.nhung's first rule I have to help those most close to me, it's my country farmers.
      Vote now!
    • You want to know what I will do for my country and other countries around the world it? tThe answer is that it is quite similar to what the country has helped you develop as we now so.¶My comments here are links 'quna rawnhf' interaction have 'qua. nhung's' first rule I have to help those most close to me, it's my country farmers.
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  • Sentence 8
    • My heart always good, when I became more and more powerful, I have the opportunity to realize his dream, which is to save people happy, I will not say specifically what you do because I see it a bit far away from a guy like my students.
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    • My heart is always good, w. When I became more and more powerful, I have the opportunity to realize this dream, which is to save the people and make them happy,. I will not say specifically what you do because I see it a bit far away from a guy like my students.
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  • Sentence 9
    • however, the perspective and direction I can strive crab summarized as follows: first: the successful career I will spend a lot of time and money of my own to help repel famine, poverty , and even I can use his fortune to contribute to country if the national budget is not sufficient for the development of social policy refer to the second mode of policy leaders ahead of other countries to reform their own way and eventually seek to help the underdeveloped countries by reasonable measures I know his desire hardly feasible, but I always believed that I would one nagyf achieved early success as a foundation for motivation higher development
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    • ¶hHowever, the perspective and direction I can strive crabfor can be summarized as follows: ¶fFirst: the successful career I will spend a lot of time and money of my own to help repel famine, poverty , and even I can use this fortune to contribute to my country if the national budget is not sufficient for the development of social policy.¶I refer to the second mode of policy leaders ahead of other countries to reform their own way and eventually seek to help the underdeveloped countries by reasonable measures. I know this desire is hardly feasible, but I always believed that I would one 'nagyf' achieved early success as a foundation for motivation higher development.
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