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- My impressions of the film
- Yesterday I went to the cinema with my friend Agnia on film "Noah".
- - I and my friend Agnia like the film but I think that my friend likes it more than I because it consist a lot of action and fantastics.
- I don't really love films like "Noah".
- - a lot of effects and actors play impressed me in this film very much, because I don't even know how it work.
- - after I had seen the film I and my friend Agnia went to the grocery store and bought two ice cream and then we went to the park.

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- Yesterday I went to the cinema with my friend Agnia on film "Noah".
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- Yesterday I went to the cinema with my friend Agnia onto the film "Noah".
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- Yesterday I went to the cinema with my friend Agnia onto see film "Noah".
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- - I and my friend Agnia like the film but I think that my friend likes it more than I because it consist a lot of action and fantastics.
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- ~~- I and m~~My friend Agnia and i, we liked the film both of us, but I think that ~~my friend likes it more~~ it liked most to my friend rather than Ime, because it ~~consist~~included a lot of action and fantas~~tic~~y, which she likes.
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- I don't really love films like "Noah".
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- I don't really love films, but i liked "Noah".
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- - a lot of effects and actors play impressed me in this film very much, because I don't even know how it work.
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- ~~- a l~~Lots of effects and actors ~~play impressed me in this film~~who played in the movie, they impressed me very much, because I doidn't even knoew how it works ( the hole thing).
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- ~~- a l~~Lots of effects and actors ~~play impressed me in this film very much,~~in the movie were very impressive because I couldon't even ~~know~~tell how ithe effects worked.
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- - after I had seen the film I and my friend Agnia went to the grocery store and bought two ice cream and then we went to the park.
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- - after ~~I had seen~~the view of the film I and my friend Agnia, we went to the grocery store and bought two ice creams and then we went to the park.
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