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Text from camille-lep - English

    • dear Maisie,

    • dear Maisie, I'm writing from Boston.
  • I'm fine, do not worry.
  • Life in the United States is very complicated.
  • Boston is a beautiful city.
    • But he must be rich to be happy here.
  • I live in a small apartment.
    • This is a dump.
    • There are even mice who live in me.
  • This is horrible.
  • In winter it is very cold.
    • Sometimes I get sick but I do not have money to treat me.
  • But I'm doing, I always healed.
  • I was hired on the docks.
    • I repair boats and I make.
    • This job is very hard and poorly paid.
  • This is not what I thought of the United States.
  • I thought we had the opportunity to succeed, but I was wrong.
  • What I saw, this is not the American dream.
  • I'll try to find another job.
    • I could buy a true and beautiful apartment.
    • I invite you to my house and we will live together this American dream.
  • I want to live happy with you in Boston.
  • I kiss you, I miss you, I love you

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English