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  • Although there is not anything in any field of knowledge management, leadership but I believe one thing: if all the peoples of the world know how interconnected, bilateral exchanges and comprehensive on all field day with each other, the more our world as well.
  • But this is only in theory, while in fact no such place entirely. in development theory and natural selection, Darwin wrote, "the loiaf want to survive and grow to compete with other species." people too. but we are different in that they have a sense of competition Vietnam is a small country, the poor, the backward agriculture, economic development has not always been vulnerable to large countries pinched. add to that the idea of an Asian country, which is conservative, stagnant, respected cultural ideology of his father's generation left, the former should lead to difficulty absorbing the world advanced State party and we set out strategic objectives are striving 2020 Vietnam became the industrialization and modernization. but according to me, as a young intellectual man, I confirm that this is the phase, period doped cultural stuff most complex social ccuar Vietnam ddeeens this before, and heard above the target as long as possible if not just look at Vietnam now reality advance innovation in Vietnam in 1996, a population of over 30 million, mainly proletariat, the workers.
  • 1996 after innovation, social fragmentation of ownership of productive assets, and the result is before the rich getting richer and the poor now it is even worse off I personally, was caused by the policy regimes of the Vietnamese government apparatus can not be used at this time reasonably to be more roi.Viet Nam fighting tradition that no other country in the biet.nhung world this is also the weakness of the government apparatus Vietnam.
  • They think that a good soldier fought it also has the ability to make economic good.This not hear very reasonable!
  • Think if I keep this momentum thif never know new people get out of poverty.
  • knowing that anything new will face opposition, but the new one comes along that if the fight becomes the cu.toi said that although a bit confusing but it's true in Vietnam you dear I think that is the motto of a modern leader, always know moi.va create a new one which of course must be based on the achievements of the government in world history.
  • As in Japan, Japanese Emperor figure out how to improve height for your children sterilized by all men, and for foreigners to conduct the survival of the species Of course, if I was the leader in self-location tuwownh I just see it as a way to refer not entirely applicable.
  • As the country I live in is Vietnam, not Japan's Ban.ca I see my government over the years has done nothing significant to his people ca.neu power in my hands to reform the entire government apparatus with the largest scale to date on all the fields. you know why I do so not from babies to adults, my parents always taught honesty directed Phat.cho until now I always returned to these things, though I do not fully understand how the machinery of government organizations in Vietnam.
  • You want to know what I will do for my country and other countries around the world it? the answer is that it is quite similar to what the country has helped you develop as we now so My comments here are links quna rawnhf interaction have qua.nhung's first rule I have to help those most close to me, it's my country farmers.
  • My heart always good, when I became more and more powerful, I have the opportunity to realize his dream, which is to save people happy, I will not say specifically what you do because I see it a bit far away from a guy like my students.
  • however, the perspective and direction I can strive crab summarized as follows: first: the successful career I will spend a lot of time and money of my own to help repel famine, poverty , and even I can use his fortune to contribute to country if the national budget is not sufficient for the development of social policy refer to the second mode of policy leaders ahead of other countries to reform their own way and eventually seek to help the underdeveloped countries by reasonable measures I know his desire hardly feasible, but I always believed that I would one nagyf achieved early success as a foundation for motivation higher development thank you for reading

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    • Although there is not anything in any field of knowledge management, leadership but I believe one thing: if all the peoples of the world know how interconnected, bilateral exchanges and comprehensive on all field day with each other, the more our world as well.
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    • But this is only in theory, while in fact no such place entirely. in development theory and natural selection, Darwin wrote, "the loiaf want to survive and grow to compete with other species." people too. but we are different in that they have a sense of competition Vietnam is a small country, the poor, the backward agriculture, economic development has not always been vulnerable to large countries pinched. add to that the idea of an Asian country, which is conservative, stagnant, respected cultural ideology of his father's generation left, the former should lead to difficulty absorbing the world advanced State party and we set out strategic objectives are striving 2020 Vietnam became the industrialization and modernization. but according to me, as a young intellectual man, I confirm that this is the phase, period doped cultural stuff most complex social ccuar Vietnam ddeeens this before, and heard above the target as long as possible if not just look at Vietnam now reality advance innovation in Vietnam in 1996, a population of over 30 million, mainly proletariat, the workers.
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    • 1996 after innovation, social fragmentation of ownership of productive assets, and the result is before the rich getting richer and the poor now it is even worse off I personally, was caused by the policy regimes of the Vietnamese government apparatus can not be used at this time reasonably to be more roi.Viet Nam fighting tradition that no other country in the biet.nhung world this is also the weakness of the government apparatus Vietnam.
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    • knowing that anything new will face opposition, but the new one comes along that if the fight becomes the cu.toi said that although a bit confusing but it's true in Vietnam you dear I think that is the motto of a modern leader, always know moi.va create a new one which of course must be based on the achievements of the government in world history.
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  • Sentence 7
    • As in Japan, Japanese Emperor figure out how to improve height for your children sterilized by all men, and for foreigners to conduct the survival of the species Of course, if I was the leader in self-location tuwownh I just see it as a way to refer not entirely applicable.
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    • As the country I live in is Vietnam, not Japan's Ban.ca I see my government over the years has done nothing significant to his people ca.neu power in my hands to reform the entire government apparatus with the largest scale to date on all the fields. you know why I do so not from babies to adults, my parents always taught honesty directed Phat.cho until now I always returned to these things, though I do not fully understand how the machinery of government organizations in Vietnam.
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    • You want to know what I will do for my country and other countries around the world it? the answer is that it is quite similar to what the country has helped you develop as we now so My comments here are links quna rawnhf interaction have qua.nhung's first rule I have to help those most close to me, it's my country farmers.
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    • My heart always good, when I became more and more powerful, I have the opportunity to realize his dream, which is to save people happy, I will not say specifically what you do because I see it a bit far away from a guy like my students.
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  • Sentence 11
    • however, the perspective and direction I can strive crab summarized as follows: first: the successful career I will spend a lot of time and money of my own to help repel famine, poverty , and even I can use his fortune to contribute to country if the national budget is not sufficient for the development of social policy refer to the second mode of policy leaders ahead of other countries to reform their own way and eventually seek to help the underdeveloped countries by reasonable measures I know his desire hardly feasible, but I always believed that I would one nagyf achieved early success as a foundation for motivation higher development thank you for reading
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