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Text from lailard - English

  • Today

    • Today, when i open my facebook, suddently my sister cousin message me and she said: " You must quickly graduate and become the best. father and Mother waiting You at home for graduation immediate accompanying you.
  • Make them pround with Your success." I just silent when accept this message, I dont answer anything.
    • But, with i get a message like this, be sure this is give me a motivation to my self to graduate soon and get a good job what i want to help My parents.
    • Be sure I will graduate this year.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Sentence 1
    • Today, when i open my facebook, suddently my sister cousin message me and she said: " You must quickly graduate and become the best. father and Mother waiting You at home for graduation immediate accompanying you.
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    • Today, when iI opened my facebook, suddently account, I found that my sister cousinhad message me and she saidd me saying: " You must quickly graduate quickly and become the best. fFather and Mmother are waiting Yfor you at home for graduation immediate accompanying youso that they can accompany you to your graduation.
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  • Sentence 3
    • But, with i get a message like this, be sure this is give me a motivation to my self to graduate soon and get a good job what i want to help My parents.
      Vote now!
    • But, with ihen I get a message like this, be you can rest assured this is give me aat it will boost my motivation to my self to graduate soon and get a good job what i want to help Mmy parents.
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