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- My first message for ya! :P
- I was surfing on internet, then I met this site and thought: It must be a good experience to aprimorate my (bad) english C: Maybe, I can make some friends too!
- If you can help me, I will be so grateful.
- And, If you guys want to, I can tell about my country, Brazil.
- I like to watch tv shows and movies, we can talk about it too!
- And music, of course.
- Goodbye, Letícia C:

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- My first message for ya! :P
  투표하세요!
- My first message for yaou! :Pp
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- I was surfing on internet, then I met this site and thought: It must be a good experience to aprimorate my (bad) english C: Maybe, I can make some friends too!
  투표하세요!
- I was surfing on internet, then I ~~met~~found this site and thought:¶It must be a good ~~experience to aprimorat~~way to improve my (bad) eEnglish C:¶Maybe, I can make some friends, too!
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- I was surfing ~~on inter~~the 'net, th~~en I met~~is morning, and I came across this website and thought~~:¶It must be a good experience to aprimorate~~, hmmm... maybe this'd be a good way of improving my (bad) eEnglish ~~C:¶M~~; and maybe, I can make some new friends too!
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- If you can help me, I will be so grateful.
  투표하세요!
- I~~f you can help me, I will be so grateful~~'d be most grateful if you can help.
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- And, If you guys want to, I can tell about my country, Brazil.
  투표하세요!
- ~~And,~~ If you ~~guys want to~~'re interested, I can t~~ell~~alk about my country, Brazil, as well.
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- And, Iif you ~~guys want to~~like, I can tell you about my country, Brazil.
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- ~~And, If you guys want to, I can tell about my country, Brazil.~~(You shouldn't start a sentence with "and". It's not a style thing, it's a semantic logic thing.)
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- I like to watch tv shows and movies, we can talk about it too!
  투표하세요!
- I like to watching tv shows and movies, we can talk about it, too!
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- I like to watch ~~tv shows and movies, we can talk about it too~~ing TV programmes and films; it's interesting to talk about them afterwards as well!
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- I like to watch tv shows and movies, and we can talk about ithem too!
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- And music, of course.
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- ~~And music~~I like music as well, of course.
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- Goodbye, Letícia C:
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- ~~Goodbye~~Bye for now, Letícia C:.¶
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