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- hi my name is evelyn and i would like to practice my english with someone!
- are there any one here?

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- hiHi. My name is Evelyn and i would like to practice my english with someone.¶Is there anyone here?
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- hi my name is evelyn and i would like to practice my english with someone!
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- are there any one here?
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