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Summer !
- For the 2014 summer holidays, I go to the UK, in my uncle's home for improve my english.
- I'll see my cousins that I've practically never seen them !
I think that would be cool.
- After this, I'll go back to my home in France and go to my grand-parents's home in the mountains !
I miss them because I'm very close to my grand-mother.

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- Summer !
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문장 1
- For the 2014 summer holidays, I go to the UK, in my uncle's home for improve my english.
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- For the 2014 summer holidays, I am goingo to the UK~~, in~~ to my uncle's home ~~for~~to improve my eEnglish.
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문장 2
- I'll see my cousins that I've practically never seen them !
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- I'll see my cousins ~~that~~who I've practically never seen them before!
  genzaimu 댓글
  
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문장 3
- I think that would be cool.
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문장 4
- After this, I'll go back to my home in France and go to my grand-parents's home in the mountains !
  투표하세요!
- After this, I'll go back to my home in France and go to my grand-parents's home in the mountains !
  genzaimu 댓글
  
  스팸 신고
  
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문장 5
- I miss them because I'm very close to my grand-mother.
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