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- My life
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Sentence 1
- I want to tell you about my life.
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Sentence 2
- I am engaged in ball dances and I like it.
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- I am ~~engaged in~~very passionate about ballroom danc~~es and I like it~~ing.
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Sentence 3
- I think that i can`t live without it.
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- I ~~think that i can`t~~don't think I would be able to live without it.
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Sentence 4
- Every week i with my partner go to the competition in Moscow. We dance good.
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- Every week ~~i with my partner~~I go to the competition in Moscow with my partner. We dance ~~good~~well.
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Sentence 5
- When we were at ours last competition in Moscow we took the third place.
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- When we were at ours last competition in Moscow we took the third place.
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Sentence 6
- I was so happy.
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Sentence 7
- Please correct my text if i did mistakes!
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- Please correct my text if ~~i did~~I made any mistakes!
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