添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

user7003からのテキスト - English

  • My today's little trip

    • Today I was outside the city.
    • My target is a small village on south of the Nizhny Novgorod - Kazakovo.
    • From Nizhny Novgorod to Kazakovo about 110 kilometers.
    • I moved out early morning in my car.
    • My way to Kazakovo was continued 2 hour.
    • In my way i listened radio.
    • In Kazakovo I good held day.
  • I came back to Nizny Novgorod at evening.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English