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  • Tourism.

    • Most countries consider tourism essential for thir economies.
  • On the other hand, there are those who believe that tourism can have serious negative effects.
    • In my opinion tourism industry is the main source of income for many countries.
    • The development of tourism is often helps certain regions to increase commerce through exporting goods and services.
    • Moreover tourism industry provides people with jobs that associated with occupation in bars and hotels so that unemployment is on the decrease and the average standart of living of people increases well.
    • And finaly tourism attracts more people to the area, it increases the prestige of the country.
    • Still some people consider that tourism has a lot of disadvantages.
    • For example, tourists cause environmental damage, do not always respect traditional cultures.
    • They throw garbage on the streets and draw graffity.
    • Moreover they might steal things from the country.
    • More traffic in the air, skies, roads make fore more pollution.
    • I agree with that but this is the problem of attitude of tourists to lows and mentality of other country.
  • If the government takes some measures to maintain order then some problems will be fixed.
    • All in all tourism is the practice of traveling for pleasure and it is also a good business that very essential for economies of many countries.
    • In my opinion this industry must develop and prosper.
    • And tourists must respect the culture and determination of the country.

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