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    • Extract from a discour of Jean Jaurès (25 July 1914).

    • Citizens, I want say you tonight that since forty years, Europe had never been in a more threatening and more tragic situation that the one we know at this hour where I have the responsibility to speak to you. Ah !
    • Citizens, I don’t want to force dark colors of the painting, I don’t want to say that the diplomatic rupture we had the new there is a half-hour, between Austria and Serbia, necessarily means that a war between Austria and Serbia will break out, and I’m not saying that if a war breaks out between Serbia and Austria the conflict will necessarily extend to the rest of Europe, but I’m saying that we have against us, against peace, against current life of men, terrible chances and against which it must be that workers of Europe try efforts of supreme solidarity that they can try.
    • Citizens, the notice that Austria send to Serbia is full of threats and if Austria invade the slave territory, if Germans, if the Germanic race from Austria violence this Serbians who are a part of Slave world for which Russia feels a deep sympathy, there is to fear and predict that Russia will come into conflict.
    • And if Russia intervenes to defend Serbia, Austria, with two opponents against her, will invoke the alliance treaty which unites her to Germany and Germany will make out that she will solidarize with Austria.
    • […] Extract from Jean Jaurès's discour - Lyon-Vaise (25 July 1914).

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    • Citizens, I don’t want to force dark colors of the painting, I don’t want to say that the diplomatic rupture we had the new there is a half-hour, between Austria and Serbia, necessarily means that a war between Austria and Serbia will break out, and I’m not saying that if a war breaks out between Serbia and Austria the conflict will necessarily extend to the rest of Europe, but I’m saying that we have against us, against peace, against current life of men, terrible chances and against which it must be that workers of Europe try efforts of supreme solidarity that they can try.
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    • Citizens, I don’t want to force dark colors of the painting,paint a dark picture. I don’t want to say that the diplomatic rupture we had the new there is abreakdown we had in the last half-hour, between Austria and Serbia, necessarily means that a war between Austria and Serbia will break outthese two countries will begin, and I’m not saying that if a war breaks out between Serbia and Austria the conflict will necessarily extend to the rest of Europe, but I’m saying that we have against us, againstthis opposes peace, againstnd our current life of men, terrible chancesway of life, and against which it must be that workers of Europe trywill make efforts ofor supreme solidarity that they can try.
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    • Citizens, I don’ not want to force dark colors of the paintingpaint us into a dark corner, I don’ not want to say that the diplomatic rupture we had the new there is athis past half-hour, between Austria and Serbia, necessarily means that a war between Austria and Serbia will break outthese two countries will unfold, and I’ am not saying that if a war breaks out between Serbia and Austria the conflict will necessarily extend to the rest of Europe, but I’ am saying that we havemuch stands against us, against peace, against courrent life of men, terrible chances way of life, and against which it must be that the workers of Europe try efforts of supreme solidarity that they can trmake the supreme effort to unite in solidarity.
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    • Citizens, the notice that Austria send to Serbia is full of threats and if Austria invade the slave territory, if Germans, if the Germanic race from Austria violence this Serbians who are a part of Slave world for which Russia feels a deep sympathy, there is to fear and predict that Russia will come into conflict.
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    • Citizens, the notice that Austria sendt to Serbia is full of threats andincluding if Austria invade the s Serb "slave territory", if Germans, if theand if anyone of Germanic racheritage fprom Austriaotes violence thisagainst Serbians who are a part of Slave world for which Russia feels a deep sympathy, there is to fear and predictn we have reason to fear that Russia will come into conflict.
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    • Citizens, the noticestatement that Austria senhanded to Serbia is full of threats, and if Austria invades the sSlaveic territory, if Germans, ior if those of the Germanic race from Austria use violence thisagainst the Serbians- who aremain a part of the larger 'Slaveic world' for which Russia feelholds a deep sympathy,- there is to fear and predict that Russia will come inton we have reason to fear that Russia, too, will enter the conflict.
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