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- Last ear i flied abroad - in Egypt.
- It was my first experience.I like to swim, to sunbathe, to dive.There are i met a lot of people and knew many sights.

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- Last ear i flied abroad - in Egypt.
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- Last year iI fl~~ied~~ew abroad - into Egypt.
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- Last ear i flied abroad - in Egypt.¶last year I traveled to Egypt.¶I would like to tell you about a journey i went a year ago. I took a trip to Egypt.
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- Last year iI fl~~ied~~ew abroad - into Egypt.
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- Last year iI fl~~ied abroad - in~~ew to Egypt.
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- Last year i f~~lied~~elt abroad - in Egypt.
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- It was my first experience.I like to swim, to sunbathe, to dive.There are i met a lot of people and knew many sights.
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- It was my first experience. I like to swim~~, to~~ming, sunbath~~e, to dive.There are i~~ing, diving. I met a lot of people and ~~kne~~saw many sights there.
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- It was my first ~~experience.~~visit to Egypt. I like to swim, to sunbathe~~, to~~ and dive. There ~~are i~~I met a lot of people and ~~kne~~saw many sights.
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- Iit was my first experience~~.I like to swim, to sunbathe, to dive.There a~~ were i met a lot of people ,and ~~knew~~i have discovered many sights. .
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