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  • Feasts.

    • Since my childhood I've been always looking forward to family dinners, feasts and dinners with friends of our family.
    • It became a habit with me to enjoy such occasions.
  • And old habits die hard.
    • Of course, it is wonderful to gather together with the members of your family or your close friends and talk the whole evening, but another good thing about these occasions is fantastic meal!
    • Roast meat like mutton, pork, beef or fowl like chicken, duck, turkey, boiled or mashed potatoes for the garnish, a wide choice of salads, tinned vegetables such as tomatoes and cucumbers, pickled mushrooms, and finally, gateaus, tart or spongy cake for the sweet course.
  • There is nothing like such a delicious dinner!
    • However it is a heavy meal and I can’t eat so much food every day.
  • But sometimes I can let my hair down and overeat.

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    • Since my childhood I've been always looking forward to family dinners, feasts and dinners with friends of our family.
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    • Since my childhood, I've been always looking forward to family dinners, feasts and dinners with friends of our family.
    • Since my childhood, I've been always looking forward to family dinners, feasts and dinners with friends of ourand family.
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    • Of course, it is wonderful to gather together with the members of your family or your close friends and talk the whole evening, but another good thing about these occasions is fantastic meal!
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    • Of course, it is wonderful to gather together with the members of your family or your close friends and talk the whole evening, but another good thing about these occasions isthat you can enjoy a fantastic meal!
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    • Roast meat like mutton, pork, beef or fowl like chicken, duck, turkey, boiled or mashed potatoes for the garnish, a wide choice of salads, tinned vegetables such as tomatoes and cucumbers, pickled mushrooms, and finally, gateaus, tart or spongy cake for the sweet course.
      투표하세요!
    • Roast meat like mutton, pork, and beef or fowl like chicken, duck, and turkey, boiled or mashed potatoes for the garnish, a wide choice of salads, tinned vegetables such as tomatoes and cucumbers, pickled mushrooms, and finally, gateaus,a pie, a tart or a spongy cake for the sweet course.
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