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Part 4
To conclude, the photo extoll multicultural values while Britain keep an influence, a control in the human exchanges.
There is a desir to stay traditionnal.
A restriction of immigration is stood in the sixties, there is less of immigrant people today in Britain.
Britain is criticize to create ethnic communities with a bad integration in the society.

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문장 1
- To conclude, the photo extoll multicultural values while Britain keep an influence, a control in the human exchanges.
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문장 2
- There is a desir to stay traditionnal.
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문장 3
- A restriction of immigration is stood in the sixties, there is less of immigrant people today in Britain.
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문장 4
- Britain is criticize to create ethnic communities with a bad integration in the society.
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