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Hello!
Hi people!
I have to do an exposed.
I'm ever corrected myself: I'll present you today the notion of spaces and exchanges, with the support of several documents we studied.
To introduce, since the beginning of the twenty-first century, the quantity of the exchanes between spaces are increased.
It's the phenomenon of the globalization.
In other word, it's the establishement of communication between distant territories in the world.
What relations do Britain treat with this exchanges?
Is it in retreat or in opening?
(Thank you very much for the correction)

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- Hi people!
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- I have to do an exposed.
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- I'm ever corrected myself: I'll present you today the notion of spaces and exchanges, with the support of several documents we studied.
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- To introduce, since the beginning of the twenty-first century, the quantity of the exchanes between spaces are increased.
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- It's the phenomenon of the globalization.
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- In other word, it's the establishement of communication between distant territories in the world.
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- What relations do Britain treat with this exchanges?
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- Is it in retreat or in opening?
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- (Thank you very much for the correction)
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