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- Greeting
Hi, everybody!
- I live in Moscow, I want to learn English, I will be glad to communicate to interesting people and to broaden the horizons

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- I live in Moscow, I want to learn English, I will be glad to communicate to interesting people and to broaden the horizons
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- I live in Moscow, and I want to learn English,. I w~~ill be glad~~ould like to communicate towith interesting people and to broaden ~~the~~my horizons.
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- I ~~live~~am living in Moscow~~, I want~~ and I love to learn English,. I will be glad to communicate towith interest~~ing~~ed people ~~and t~~, who broaden ~~the~~my horizons.
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- I ~~live~~am living in Moscow, I wanting to learn English~~, I~~ and will be glad to communicate towith interesting people ~~and~~ to broaden ~~the~~my horizons.
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